From what I've heard...
you have potential and I think if you updated your instruments your other songs would sound better, and as far as this one goes, I really enjoyed it. I really liked the beat and there isn't much I could think to add to it except maybe for some bass(but that's just my opinion.) That'd be sweet to have all human noises along with a hip hop bass. The reason I gave you a 9 instead of a 10 is because I can see it being more complex. Overall it's good stuff. Keep making music. ;)
Oh, I almost forgot, if you would, could you please review some of my stuff? If not, that's cool but I'd appreciate it.